14. I massage her stomach until her baby (came) out. 15. I like to (exploring without to) explore nature to refresh my mind, (•) 16. With nature i (I) always remember (that) God is available and i (I) am be (dalete be) grateful, (•) 17. maybe next my personality i am a explorer.Next one of my...
9. He is very cool if he play(s) the guitar. 10. ....maybe what people said i (I) am kindly (kind) and i (I) am funny people (person). 11. I think doing good or kind to all people (is a) must, because if you (are) kind to all people, all people will treat you way (the same way). 12. And after that
5. Then (,) i (I) like to (delete to) singing (•) 6. (A new sentence) I singing (sing) almost everytime and everyday. 7. After that (,) i (I) also like to (delete to) playing guitar, (•) 8 (A new sentence) It is not perfect when (I am) singing without using a guitar.
1. Hi, I am Nadia Puspita Dewi (•) 2. (A new sentence) im (I'm) 17 Years Old. 3. I am from Cipacing, Jatinangor and im (I'm a) student of Masoem University. 4. I love to (delete to) listening (to) music because music can improve my mood, refresh my mind and then music also make(s) me happy and ...
Generally, your text describes youself very well in terms of your personality and hobby. It's a good job, Nadia 👍👍.However, I have some notes for your improvement. When you write down "I", please use a capital letter. Then, if you want to abbreviate I am become I'm. Don't forget t...
13. I am (delete am) also really likes (like) children. I really like them. I also like the period of their growth which is growing well. 14. and (delete and) I had thought to (take) major in child psychology (child psychology major/ program) when I entered college. 15. I think the end of this text
9. I am a sensitive person because I am among those who cannot see others in distress wherever it is, (•) (What does this sentence mean?) 10 (A new sentence) Sometimes I also easily cry when touched on (delete on) by some things that I don't like. 11. on (On) the other side (,) I also have a (d...
6. And (delete and) I also really love swimming, (delete comma before or) or playing in waterpark, (delete comma before because) because I can find a lot (of) water. 7. (A new sentence) and (delete and) My another hobby’s watching my favorit content creator. She is jurnalrisa. 8. why (Why) I lo...
1. My name is (A)alia (N)nurdayani, (•) 2. i (I) am 18 years old, (•) 3. I am student ( a second semester student) at masoem university (delete on 2nd smster here) on second semestester , (•) 4. I stay in aljawami boarding school. 5. I have sepeciall time in leasure time.usually I do lady...
Generally, your text describes yourself very well in terms of your personality and hobby. That's good Aliya 👍👍😊. However, I have some feedback for you for your improvement. Remember that whenever you end a sentence use a fullstop (•) not comma (,) 😉
8. i (I)'m a quiet but can be friendly person, (•) 9. (A new sentence) Sometimes (I) can be independent and also can be a moody person, (delete comma before because) because i didn't like to be (a) talkative person.
5. (A new sentence) and (delete and) i (I) love to (delete to) cleaning the house because i (I) really hates when i (I) see the house in a mess and dirty (•) 6. (A new sentence) It feels disgusting. 7. i (I) also love to (delete to) watching movie on (at) cinema or (on) laptop when i (I) feel b...
1. i (I)'m 18 years old, (delete comma before and) and i'm from (M)majalaya. 2. now (Now) i(I)'m a student at Ma'soem University. 3. i (I) love listening to music because i (I) can refresh my mind when i (I) feel sad or bad mood. 4. and (delete and) When i (I) can't sleep i (I) must listen (to) a...
In general, your text describes youself very well in terms of personality and hobby. It's a good job Afifah 👍👍👍😊. Nevertheless, I have some notes for improvement. Afifah, remember that whenever you start a new sentence use a capital letter 😉 and the word "I" is always usi...
In general, your text describes youself very well in terms of personality and hobby. It's very good 👍👍👍
6. But sometimes I am little shy if I meet a new person (•) 7. (A new sentence) and (delete and) I'm use (wearing) hijab, short, and then I'm chubby. 8. I'm use (have been wearing) hijab when (since) I'm (was) at junior high school because my father say (said), "A woman (looks) beautiful i...
1. My name is Resty Oktavia (but) you can call me Ares,reres and resty. 2. I live in Babakan Sukarasa, (•) 3. (A new sentence) and (delete and) I'm (a) student in Ma'soem University. 4. I love listening (to) music, reading and cooking, (delete comma before because) because I can feel happy if I...
That's a good text, Resti 👍👍. The text describes yourself very well. However, remember that this is a descriptive text about your profile so you don't need to greet people in the beginning of the text 😊😉. Besides, I find several grammatical errors.
5. (A new sentence) and (delete and) also I reading (I also read) comics because sometimes I can't wait to know the continuation of the story of some anime that hasn't aired yet. 6. ...., but if you already know (have already known) me so well maybe I can be a talkactive and humble person especia...
1. My name is Devi Indah Wulansari, (•) 2. I was born in Bandung, on January 22, 2001, so now i’m 19 years old, (•) 3. In my pleasure time (,) I love to draw (drawing without to) because by drawing I can express my feeling, (•) 4. (A new sentence) and (replace and with Besides, ) I like w...
