Overall, the text is organized very well. The grammar is almost perfect. That's awesome 👍👍👍👍. Nevertheless, I have some notes for your improvement.
1. Talking about the amount of words, your text is consists of less than 200 words. Maybe next time you can write a text with more words; 2.Chubby is an adjective, so you can say I'm a little bit cubby...
In general, your text describes youself very well in terms of personality and hobby. It's a good job Bu 👍👍👍😊. Nevertheless, I have some notes for improvement.
1. Whenever you end the sentence, please give pull stop (•) and then use a capital letter. For example: My name is Irmayanti, (•) i (I)'m 37 years old, (•). 2. I lived (live) at (in) Cileunyi. 3. I work (have been working) at Al Masoem since 2005...
4. My hobbies are travelling, watch (watching) movie and culliner (culinary). 5. I'm (an) independent woman because i (I) can do anything by my self (myself).
6. i (I) 'm friendly because i (I) like have (having) more friends, (•) 7. i (I) 'm easy going (and) i don't like complicated things 8. i (I) 'm talkative (because) i like talk (talking) with other people
Nendah, your text is organized very well and it describes you very detailed. That's awesome, Nendah 👍👍👍👍😊 . Nevertheless, I have some notes for your improvement.
1. I’m an English Education student at Ma’soem University, (•). 2. I’m 18 years old and my birthday (is) on September 10, 2001. 3. I’m (without am) usually watching (watch) movie on my laptop or television.
4. I always listening (listen to) music on my phone and I like pop music. 5. ....in afternoon if I have several time I playing (play) volleyball with my friends. 6. From the 3 activities that I like. (,) I more (delete more) like watching (most) or watching is the most I like.
7. I’m someone who is easy going person (delete person) (•) I can be a good friend for everyone. 8. I’m friendly because I want (to) have a lot of friend(s). 9. ... tu be continued 😊
That's a wonderful writing. You've described your profile very detailed and well organized. The grammar on your text is almost perfect. I'm really satisfied with your text 👍👍👍👍. I only find a few minor errors. Nevertheless, for your improvement, I'm going to tell you those minor errors.
1. My friend(s) usually call me fikri. 2. I often go the beach and climb a mountain, (•) 3. I have climb(ed) several of (delete of) mountain(s) in west java, (delete , before like) like Guntur, Cikuray, Papandayan, and one of the highest mount (mountains) in west java, Ciremai Mountain.
4. ..... because now I live alone in (a) boarding home. 5. I always cook by my own self (by myself), eat and sleep alone without family, (•) 6. Since I was little (a child), I used to live with solitude.
9. And the (then), I’m (a) humorous person, (delete , before because) because sometimes I make a joke if (I) talking with (talk to) my friends. 10. Perpectionis person that me (I'm a perfectionist person which means I’m a person who want(s) everything to be perpect. 11. I’m a tidy person be...
That's a very good writing Fit 👍👍👍. Your text describes youself very detailed. I really like it 😍. However, I find some grammar errors. Remember that whever you end a sentence, please use a fullstop (•) not comma (,) 😉. For your improvement I'm going to explain the errors on your...
1. Hello my name is Fitri Anjani , (•) my (My) friends usually call me Fitri Or Mfit like my nick name in my game, (•) I’m 19 years old , (•) I’m female , (•) and (delete and) I live in linggar warung cina , (•) I’m a student ,(•) 2. in (In) my leisure time (,) I usually playing...
