4. My hobbies are travelling, watch (watching) movie and culliner (culinary). 5. I'm (an) independent woman because i (I) can do anything by my self (myself).
1. Whenever you end the sentence, please give pull stop (•) and then use a capital letter. For example: My name is Irmayanti, (•) i (I)'m 37 years old, (•). 2. I lived (live) at (in) Cileunyi. 3. I work (have been working) at Al Masoem since 2005...
In general, your text describes youself very well in terms of personality and hobby. It's a good job Bu 👍👍👍😊. Nevertheless, I have some notes for improvement.
1. Talking about the amount of words, your text is consists of less than 200 words. Maybe next time you can write a text with more words; 2.Chubby is an adjective, so you can say I'm a little bit cubby...
Overall, the text is organized very well. The grammar is almost perfect. That's awesome 👍👍👍👍. Nevertheless, I have some notes for your improvement.
