Devi, your text is organized very well and it describes you very detailed. That's awesome, Devi👍👍👍👍😊 . Remember that whenever you end a sentence use a fullstop (•) not comma (,). Besides, I have some other notes for your improvement.
6. I'm a lazy person and stubborn (a lazy and stubborn person) but sometimes I can make jokes then make other people laugh.
3. Then (,) if I (am) bored play (playing) volleyball I have another hobby (which is) playing games (•) 4. Since I was a child someone always teaches (taught) me playing a game. 5. I'm a friendly person, humble, (a friendly and humble person) but I have a negative personality (•)
1. My name is Ervan Fauzan, (•) You can call me Ervan, (•) I’m 19 years old, (•) I was born in Sumedang, December 18th, 2000, (•) My address is caringin RT03 RW10, Jatinangor, East (West) Java, (•) Currently, I’m studying in Masoem University, (•) 2. If I have free time I like pla...
That's a good writing Ervan 👍👍👍. Your text describes yourself very well. Nevertheless, I find some grammatical errors on your text. Remember that whenever you end a sentence please use a fullstop (•) not comma (,) 😉. For your improvement I'm going to explain you those errors.
11. I’m easy going so I have a lot of friends everywhere for example in my campus I’m (delete am use make) friends with superintendent like Mr. Agus, Mr. urqon, Yanyan, Ujang, Ari, wandi and many more. 12. I’m cheerful everyday and sometime(s) I like (making) joke although (it is) crunchy. ...
7. and (delete and, use Besides,) I like listening (to) music when I want (to) listen something (that) make(s) me fresh or mellow music. 8. I’m a (delete a) talkative, friendly, easy going , humble, and childish. 9. Whenever I (am) with my friends very close (my close friends) or my best friend...
3. I like movie(s) with genre thriller (thriller genre), (•) 4. I don’t know why I really like that genre although sometime(s) I (am) scared (•) 5. and (delete and) I like watch (watching) anime too. 6.I like playing game like mobile legends with my friends because game (can) accompany me w...
1. Hello my name is Fitri Anjani , (•) my (My) friends usually call me Fitri Or Mfit like my nick name in my game, (•) I’m 19 years old , (•) I’m female , (•) and (delete and) I live in linggar warung cina , (•) I’m a student ,(•) 2. in (In) my leisure time (,) I usually playing...
That's a very good writing Fit 👍👍👍. Your text describes youself very detailed. I really like it 😍. However, I find some grammar errors. Remember that whever you end a sentence, please use a fullstop (•) not comma (,) 😉. For your improvement I'm going to explain the errors on your...
9. And the (then), I’m (a) humorous person, (delete , before because) because sometimes I make a joke if (I) talking with (talk to) my friends. 10. Perpectionis person that me (I'm a perfectionist person which means I’m a person who want(s) everything to be perpect. 11. I’m a tidy person be...
4. ..... because now I live alone in (a) boarding home. 5. I always cook by my own self (by myself), eat and sleep alone without family, (•) 6. Since I was little (a child), I used to live with solitude.
1. My friend(s) usually call me fikri. 2. I often go the beach and climb a mountain, (•) 3. I have climb(ed) several of (delete of) mountain(s) in west java, (delete , before like) like Guntur, Cikuray, Papandayan, and one of the highest mount (mountains) in west java, Ciremai Mountain.
That's a wonderful writing. You've described your profile very detailed and well organized. The grammar on your text is almost perfect. I'm really satisfied with your text 👍👍👍👍. I only find a few minor errors. Nevertheless, for your improvement, I'm going to tell you those minor errors.
7. I’m someone who is easy going person (delete person) (•) I can be a good friend for everyone. 8. I’m friendly because I want (to) have a lot of friend(s). 9. ... tu be continued 😊
4. I always listening (listen to) music on my phone and I like pop music. 5. ....in afternoon if I have several time I playing (play) volleyball with my friends. 6. From the 3 activities that I like. (,) I more (delete more) like watching (most) or watching is the most I like.
1. I’m an English Education student at Ma’soem University, (•). 2. I’m 18 years old and my birthday (is) on September 10, 2001. 3. I’m (without am) usually watching (watch) movie on my laptop or television.
Nendah, your text is organized very well and it describes you very detailed. That's awesome, Nendah 👍👍👍👍😊 . Nevertheless, I have some notes for your improvement.
6. i (I) 'm friendly because i (I) like have (having) more friends, (•) 7. i (I) 'm easy going (and) i don't like complicated things 8. i (I) 'm talkative (because) i like talk (talking) with other people
