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Sugar and Coffee - Their Love, Their Fate


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Sugar and Coffee - Their Love, Their Fate
I composed this story and posted in wordpress, I simply forgot the password and unable to modify to correct some grammar mistakes.
I copied all here, some corrections might be applied. Enjoy!
The Beginning
It began with a message in an instant messenger, on November 2008. It all happened so fast, too fast that has ended in January 2009.
They were actually not in good condition for any relationships more than just friends. Sugar had a wonderful family with 6 years old son and 3 years old daughter, with loving husband. Coffee’s previous relationship with his 7 years girlfriend, had just ended several weeks before they met.
They ended it as sweet as they can to make it good. They were kissing as they parted and Coffee watched as the Taxi took her home
Their relationship must be ended somehow, this story had just begun, as he could feel another good love went astray.
I copied all here, some corrections might be applied. Enjoy!
The Beginning
It began with a message in an instant messenger, on November 2008. It all happened so fast, too fast that has ended in January 2009.
They were actually not in good condition for any relationships more than just friends. Sugar had a wonderful family with 6 years old son and 3 years old daughter, with loving husband. Coffee’s previous relationship with his 7 years girlfriend, had just ended several weeks before they met.
They ended it as sweet as they can to make it good. They were kissing as they parted and Coffee watched as the Taxi took her home
Their relationship must be ended somehow, this story had just begun, as he could feel another good love went astray.
Diubah oleh Erroneous 01-06-2016 11:16
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