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[poetry] Freedom
Quote:[poetry] Freedom
hope you like itemoticon-Kiss (S)
i'm not that fluent, sorry emoticon-Berduka (S)
Quote:Original Posted By esiaceria
i'm not that fluent, sorry emoticon-Berduka (S)


its ok dearemoticon-Kiss (S)

Hepi 
Ooh La La!

Whence the poet doth read another' verses,
He laughed and saith: I don't mean discourses.

To put my sail on the distant sky and lie,
Must I be hampered with sadness and cry?

To see beautiful things only in comedy,
That is not a poet's real clarity.

See a dove flying free and be envy?
Such thing is a poet's tragic privy.

To be free from all the things we hate?
Truly, our foolishness has not been sated.

To look at the bountiful days and smile,
What people cannot reach to such short mile?

Freedom has always been there but you shove.
Bored to thine pining and sigh to the dove,

I lay mine self under the moonlight stream,
By her gentle rock, she sent me to dream.

Mine forehead doth her beauty cold lips kisseth,
A sign from her that I always be missed.

In deep slumber I became the Dreaming,
Thus lo, I am being and becoming.
thats nice[poetry] Freedom
Spoiler for 1st poetry:
Spoiler for 2nd poetry:

those two are niceemoticon-thumbsup

this is mine

I don't know the names of these wildflower, but I still find them beautiful.

I won't pick them, but I look at them from a distance instead.

If I were dead right now, they would still bloom beautifully.

Blue-sky unrequited love a romance born beneath the sky is blooming beautifully as the sun is rising.


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is the poetry telling us about a dove trying to migrate but got stucked on a storm?? emoticon-Bingung *clueless*
it's the silence that so loud
Quote:Original Posted By rafiqm
it's the silence that so loud


hm.. I'm still clueless. I'm a better person in interpreting visually... emoticon-Malu (S)
nice works....

keep writing! love it... emoticon-Smilie
I like rhyme in poem.
wew, just found this thread and I like this.
the picture doesn't appear in my pc emoticon-Frown
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