could we get bak on track please ppl? \nthere's a separate thread for what you guys are dealing right now.\n:) thanks.\nid appreciate some help and initiation.
\n\nfor this piece, I think grammar-wise it's pretty much good. \nbut the idea and coherency of the piece is the problem.\nwhat do you guys think? hah pepoluan :D hvnt seen u for a while.\npepoluan & handsome show me your insight on this piece.
care to share? :D\n\nhere's an excerpt from somewhere. feel free to criticize/review/revise/whatever you want to do with it :)\n\nWhatever we do, we are exposed to some kind of ominous event that is unpredictable. The idea of unpredictability and danger could be described in ...
\n\nwhy dont u post yr college essays? thats the point of this thread.\nnah i dun think u got my drift m8. \nthere's a separate forum for your jabberwocky.\nnt just grammar, but writing consist of a variety of factors.\ngrmmr and the usage of words, and clarity of the...
\n\nnot just grammar-wise but also improvisations to make the writing more readable and concise yet coherent. \nI think for the above corrections, u leaned towards the grammatical aspect, \nwhy not include both factors and try it again? :D
\n\nu cud always create a thread considerin those ideas. \nfeel free. i'll put it as sticky since it will benefit most of the Efers.
\n\nnice try. \ni sensed some grammatical mistakes.\nbut hey we're here to learn, no one' sperfect.\nanyhow, here's my correction.\nthere's still more room for change.\n\nDear Q-ers,\n\nPlease read this document thoroughly.\n\nNe...
\n\ni wanted to the break the chain, and i needed that attention.\nthe thread's deviating from the main purpose, writings' are supposed to be revised by others to improve one's writing, but it just wasnt.\n\nhope u understand my real intention of posting such co...
Feel Free to correct this particular text\n\nDear all Qers,\n\nHope you guys have the time to actually sit down and read this\ndocument thorougly.\n\nNew Policy for the Q. \nWith the new chief at hand, there will be some changes, not to mention some new systems wil...
\n\ngood try.\n\nDespite the intensive and short period of the course, I was able to make friends with other students, especially those from Hong Kong. I am very fortunate to have taken Prof. Chois managerial accounting. What Ive experienced through this course is simply exemp...