Hi everyone. I need your help. Please go check my task (it's just a short story), read it and give your corrections and give your comments in terms of the language style, language used, and diction used. it would be better if you're a native (british, american, aussie), but i don't mind if you're...
Hi everyone. I need your help. Please go check my task (it's just a short story), read it and give your corrections and give your comments in terms of the language style, language used, and diction used. it would be better if you're a native (british, american, aussie), but i don't mind if you're...
Hi Ezrov, thanks for your comment. I'm sorry I have many grammatical errors because I'm not a native and I just learn English. Can ypu show me where the errors? and please, give the corrections please! Your corrections will useful for me to repair my story be better than before. Thank you :)
Please go check my task (it's just a short story), read it and give your comments in terms of the language style, language used, and diction used. it would be better if you're a native (british, american, aussie), but i don't mind if you're not. Thank you. ------------------------------------------
