These are some personal (based on my current knowledge of English) revisions on the text You have posted: Red Sentence(s) Having completed/finished all the required courses and then desperately killed all my time, most of which spent online, I was still unable to return back home. Orange Sentence
Hey guys, I just found out about this thread on Kaskus, and I'm so excited about it. I used to do this (checking some writing of students) before when I was working as a Part Time Personal Tutor. And honestly, It helped me a lot to improve my English (especially in Grammar and Vocabulary). So, I w
