\n\nHello guys.. My name's IF 30-01 ;\nI was born (by enforcement --> I'm not sure what you're trying to say, so I'll leave it at that for now), but have been growing up n living at IT Telkom on the basis of LOVE and TOGETHERNESS. It has been like that and will ...
\n\nSo is the purpose of this thread solely to improve one's writing grammar-wise, or would you include improvisations in style, etc? Because what I'd do is mostly edit the vocab/ grammar; not so much on altering the writing style (though sometimes it can't be helped!)...&#...
Agree with rein110. I've no aptitude for formulizing grammar anyway. Then again, i do feel that when you're studying languages it helps to compartmentalize and simplify things.
\n\nBoth 'terrified' and 'shocked' in the way you meant above are emotional states rather than reflex reactions, if you remove 'am' 'is' etc, they become actions that you impose upon someone/ something else. E.g.\n\nA was terrified = A was e...
\n\nThanks, glad to be of help (and btw, I'm a 'sis', lol). Unfortunately, I'm not an English teacher or anything and I'm really bad at explaining technical stuff...just like you know where to correct a sentence in Bahasa Indonesia but can't exactly pinpoint ...
\n\nA strapping middle-aged man got off his car and approached a mansion he assumed to be a cozy tavern he might stay in. Standing courageously right in front of the old quiet house, he looked around a bit. He somehow started to feel bad when he saw someone-or something-that he might not ...
\n\nI'm trying to retain your writing style, so I'll merely correct grammatical errors and replace some words :)\n\nThere are so many things we don’t comprehend well about our minds. In general, we use our minds to think as we please. Sometimes we use it to find wa...
\n\nJust my two pennies...\n\n"Despite the intensity and brevity of the course, I made friends with other students, especially those from Hong Kong. I am very fortunate to have taken Prof. Choi's managerial accounting course. Words alone would not suffice to describe the...
Baru beli Hard-boiled Wonderland and The End of the World by Haruki Murakami.\n\nTapi kapan bisa keburu baca, ga tau deh...
