1. After "On Monday" u must use coma (,) 2. "I’m immediately take a bath" it appears that the form of the verb does not work with ('m) in this sentence. u should use " I’m immediately taking a bath" 3. after "as usual" u must use comma (,) "as usua...
I found some error in your text, I think after words "Finally" and "Instead" you should put a comma (,) after that words then we went to look for food and waited for the rain to stop I think waited is for past situations you must use be "Waiting". Thank you
I found something error, you can fix that In my opinion, in the title I think not "how to be trust" but "how to be trusted" then "you tim met" but "your teammate" "today after I got home from campus I got". better use "today after i got home f