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(Help) Please Correct My Grammar
Hello everyone its nice to meet you 
okay just cut to the chase,
i have try to make a lyric about falling in love
im about to make a song with a theme "Falling in love"
please correct the error grammar , because i really weak in a structure
what do you think? is it sweet enough?

okay just cut to the chase,
i have try to make a lyric about falling in love

im about to make a song with a theme "Falling in love"

Spoiler for lyric:
please correct the error grammar , because i really weak in a structure
what do you think? is it sweet enough?



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