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Membalas thread iaml • 20-08-2014 21:16

@yurilowell: managed to get a scene done, so I've got that going for me. There are still a lot of scenes to be written though. Word count so far is 1600 or so, so I expect the finished product would hit the 10,000 words mark. Hm, what else. I'm pretty sure I'll need to edit it heavily once I'm done

Membalas thread Olli3 • 20-08-2014 20:05

All about Grammar & Tenses - The correct way to say/use .... ask it here !!

Thanks for your input. "Lack" is Verb (as merriam webster dictionary). I know that Briton is commonly known as British people. Given that there is "a english course provider" named Briton in Indonesia, it is only to prevent misconception.:malus You misunderstood me. I said 'l

Membalas thread iaml • 20-08-2014 17:53

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I want them all, both your opinions and criticisms, but pm me please. I'm shy about my own writing. There's no reason to be shy. I jumped into the world of writing head first and got "flamed" a lot then. Thankfully I've got thick skin and I've improved quite a bit since then. But yes,

Membalas thread Olli3 • 20-08-2014 16:44

All about Grammar & Tenses - The correct way to say/use .... ask it here !!

You are right, but I think the correct reason why it is wrong, is that 'lack' is an uncountable noun. I don't see why lack being an uncountable noun makes it wrong. The sentence structure implies that the lack there is a verb, and that's what I went with.

Membalas thread Olli3 • 20-08-2014 16:37

All about Grammar & Tenses - The correct way to say/use .... ask it here !!

While we're at it I'll add some corrections of my own, shall I? It should be "help me proofread my assignment", not "help me proofreading", and after lacks there should not be 'of'. Lack of is not a verb, so choose one or the other, eg there's a lack of rational sense in the sys

Membalas thread iaml • 20-08-2014 16:29

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yes pleaseee thankssss:matabelo You haven't actually answered my question, love. Haha. I just want to check, in case you don't want the criticism to be made public as well. So, where shall I do it?

Membalas thread iaml • 20-08-2014 15:53

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@kaygeekay: I've read your story. Do you want me to give an opinion here or through a pm? I promise I will try to give a constructive criticism, well, as best as I could.

Membalas thread iaml • 19-08-2014 20:48

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Not as often as I wish. This site could be a little bit harsh with noobs like me since they can't even explain a trope without referring to another trope. But I think it is great for story writers alike. For you and yuriowell, and maybe zapta if he is interested, I have a short story that I want

Membalas thread iaml • 19-08-2014 17:46

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Do you guys know http://tvtropes.org/ ? Yes, I'm familiar with the site. Seen some pages in detail but not all. I think I saw the one on legendary weapons because I was researching Odin Sphere more deeply. I could've remembered wrong though. You use that site often? I was thinking of using i

Membalas thread iaml • 18-08-2014 17:33

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OK how's it going there ? Vampirism as a plot device would be great if used correctly. Most girls like vampire stories that has some sort of love triangle in it. I'm not saying the concept is dull and repetitive but what all matter is the plot construction, I think. Most girls like romance

Membalas thread iaml • 16-08-2014 16:41

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Is it Twilight saga ? I don't know that you like vampire romance stories. So you can't continue to write now due to your unfixed laptop, I see then. I meant vampirism as a plot device, not Twilight. I don't read or watch Twilight, and probably never will. I probably didn't mention what kind of

Membalas thread iaml • 16-08-2014 13:15

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Sorry just got back from tight schedule. Well I hope you'll be done with your work out there. You still got time right ? don't worry, I know you can finish your story before the submission. btw, will there be a reward for the fest winner ? oou and what are you currently writing ? Thanks, I watc

Membalas thread iaml • 12-08-2014 21:18

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You should take some walking around. go to places you like and be sure to rest ur mind a bit. sometimes it works on me :) Well I'm still continuing my story that i've shown u before. But I just got another story ideas that I would like to try writing bout it. I'll show u later. Nope. The outlin

Membalas thread iaml • 12-08-2014 11:32

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How's ur progress ? almost done ? lol I could lie and say yes, I suppose, but that would be one big, fat lie. Sigh. No, I haven't gotten anywhere since... end of July? I haven't even continued it. Ugh. At this rate I'm going to have another breakdown two weeks before the due date. What about yo

Membalas thread iaml • 11-08-2014 13:30

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Can i share some of my poem in here ? Opinions from all of you would really help me alot ! :D I'm not qualified to give criticism on poetry as I'm a horrible poet; but go on ahead. The more the merrier, right?

Membalas thread iaml • 06-08-2014 17:03

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OK, it's nice that you're able to make sentences very lightly as it needs more than just normal practices like real conversations. But are you currently using Wattpad to write ? I just heard the site gives a good start for anyone who wants to write. I made my account yesterday but I'm not sure h

Membalas thread iaml • 05-08-2014 05:38

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Well seems we writing lovers had done the same thing I guess. But did u read a lot of book before you're having a good writing with english ? I hope so coz I'm trying to read more books here. Most of them say reading stories might open a good access for our writing method. Of course I did. Oth

Membalas thread iaml • 04-08-2014 20:54

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I've never written my own fandom before instead creating a parody from the original story like replacing the characters with my own created characters and changing some of the plot structures that I like. I know that sounds amateur and silly, but I quit writing stuffs like that. Anyway, what sto

Membalas thread iaml • 04-08-2014 19:22

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@yurilowell: I've already listed my current fandoms above. Yes, there are more than one. Yes, I do write for all of them currently, switching fandoms depending on the story idea, because I have to choose which set of characters and settings fit the idea best. Again, the story moves very slow, imo.

Membalas thread iaml • 01-08-2014 17:39

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Okay, too lazy to read your thread but i got the perception from the title. Allright. Firstly, i dont know what would i write, maybe i will write a random topic but i think its okay because this thread doesnt give a spesific topic to discuss together. Okay, i just trying to improve my english so ...