\n\nGood good :)\n\nHmm kalo menurut aku sih berdasarkan pengalaman, ngga masalah mau pindah kemana yang penting alasannya udah jelas pindah ke situ kenapa. Kalo balik ke tempat asal mungkin lebih bagus lagi kali asalkan ada alasan yang jelas kenapa kok balik situ lagi. Alasan yan...
\n\nNgga lapor diri maksudnya lapor diri kemananya? Ke sekolahnya ato ke consulate Indo?\n\nBukan mau kasih bad news nih cuman sharing apa yang dialemin ama saudaraku. Dia dulu pulang ke Indo ngga lapor ato minta cap/tanda tangan dr kantor International Student di sekolahnya karen...
Desain apa? Graphic Design? Interior? Game? Animation? Fashion?\n\nArt Center College of Design yang TERBAGUS dan TERMAHAL, mostly yang bagus untuk Graphic Design, Product ama yang Advertising related.\n\nUniversity of Southern California ---> Yang terkenal di sini tuh jurusan ...
\n\nHehe, kalo yang itu mah Poison Ivy, embah :D Saya dengan sukses pernah kena tuh tanaman. :nohope:
\n\nWaahh congratz!!! Turut ikut bahagia nih. :)\n\nSetelah baca2x ama denger dari crita orang2x, sekarang mau ambil visa student aja sulit juga ya? Padahal dulu pengalamanku tuh 2x apply visa, 2x dikasih dengan interview tanpa lebih dari 3 menitan laahh. Cuman tanya tujuan, sekol...
Agree on the word choice. They are well written though, with just some minor grammar errors and misused words.\n\nEverybody wants to impress readers with the big words and put the thesaurus into use (I know I do), however, try not to get the readers all confused or lost. Words such as ped...
\n\nHi!\nI assume this is a movie review, yes?\nI always think that introducing the title of the movie at the very beginning is always the best move, unless you already have it as the main title of your review. Most movie reviews I've read use present simple considering you c...
Hah! Masa gratis? Kok dulu pas lapor diri di LA disuruh bayar ya? lupa juga sih buat apaan, ya udah deh, besok2x kalo lapor lagi at least dah tau kalo gratis :D
Eeehhhh, I'm just an amateur. ;)\n\n--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------\n\nHere you go, found my scribbles. It's only in points. But hopefully it's helpful.\n\n\nNON-FICTION\n\n#1 Sta...
^^^\n\nHmm I think I did share a few hints/suggestions somewhere in this forum, either in this thread or the other one (The "Permintaan bantuan......" one). I used to have this one good book about how to improve your writing (well, more of a improving your fiction writing skill,...
No prob :)\n\nI think you should use boladela's version. It's better hehe.\n\nI just noticed ambiguous sentence here.\n\n"The origin of the moon is still unknown until nowadays"\n\nI thought you were talking about the origin was unknown to this ...
\n\nHehe, 6R4Y has his essay in both British English and American English. Well, it's up to you now, 6R4Y. :)\n\nThat's why I love this forum, we have Australian English, British English, American English, Anybody knows about Canadian English??? ;p
\n\nHi!\n\nNice one, Don! And boy, you have no idea how happy I was seeing your very last sentence! :)\n\nOk, in my opinion, I think you should use "the" instead of "a" for \n\n"Government as a servant of their people should provide service...
\n\nHi! \nI like it. It's simple and not too wordy. I've only spotted a few grammar errors.\n\nThe moonlight that we see in the night time is actually coming from the sunlight reflection.\n\nHowever, scientists have found a fact that the moon was formed from ...
*scratching my head, perplexing* What does "getting ready for bed" have anything to do with fulfilling someone's heart? Oh well....
\n\nThe first one.\n\nFinal Fantasy is supposed to be the emphasis, the one and only and Liberi Fatali is one of many Final Fantasy's original soundtracks. Eehh I don't know, hehehe. But definitely the first one. I've seen authors write it that way.
\n\nMasih cuman freelance aja kok. :D\n\nMemang kok OCC Intl student office tuh responnya lamban, kalo bisa coba ditelpon aja.\n\nIni emergency contact buat sekolahnya ya? Hmmm saudara kamu mau apa ngga kalo address mereka dipake buat emergency contact? kalo mau ya pake me...
